alarm
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I don\'t think all countries need an alarm system.
South Korea is in the special truce situation with North Korea.
It is very sad, there are keeping on the big and small more wars in the world than I think.
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Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
I guess an alarm system should be handled properly to avoid panic and chaos. The person in charge must be calm and knows how to handle emergency situations so that they would not be spreading fake news to create fear in citizens.
Thank you for this and talk to you later.
Aki~
I don\'t think all countries need an alarm system.
>> CORRECT!
South Korea is in the special truce situation with North Korea.
>> CORRECT!
It is very sad, there are keeping on the big and small more wars in the world than I think.
>> CORRECT!
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