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What do you like best about family gatherings?
>>> At first, It\'s good to be together. Although we live in same space, we can\'t easily gather because of various reaons.
Second, I like drinking itself so much because I like its taste. I\'m sure that I can\'t drink alchol without any foods but harmony with delicious foods raises Soju\'s flavor. My dad and I are great Soju-mate so we enjoy gatherings.
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Hi, [이름]!
Second, I like drinking itself so much because I like its taste.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
What do you like best about family gatherings?
>>> At first, it\'s good to be together.
>>> At first, it\'s good to be together.
>> CORRECT!
Although we live in same space, we can\'t easily gather because of various reaons.
>> Although we live in the same space, we can\'t easily gather because of various reasons.
Second, I like drinking itself so much because I like its taste.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m sure that I can\'t drink alchol without any foods but harmony with delicious foods raises Soju\'s flavor.
>> I\'m sure that I can\'t drink alchol without any foods because delicious foods raises Soju\'s flavor. A delicious food harmonizes well with alcohol.
OR >> I\'m sure that I can\'t drink alchol without any foods because delicious foods raises Soju\'s flavor. A delicious food goes well with alcohol.
My dad and I are great Soju-mates so we enjoy gatherings.
>> CORRECT!
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