Ali~

2010-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi, teacher Ali~ It's [이름]. I'm sorry for letting you know that I'm going to take a short break until the exam day through writing. I should have talked to you about it yesterday on the phone, but at that time I was not sure whether to stop the class or not. Just wait for me about one week please.^^ Have good days and see you soon. Bye~~

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Hi [이름]!

Don’t worry about it, I’m sure that exam is of prime importance right now, I wish you all the best and I’m crossing my fingers  that you will be taken. Concentrate on that test and worry about our class later. I look forward to speaking with you again next week. God speed!

 Ali

Here are some corrections here:

Hi, teacher Ali~

>>> Correct

>>>OR: Hi Teacher Ali!
It's [이름].

>>>Correct

>>>OR: It’s me, [이름].
I'm sorry for letting you know that I'm going to take a short break until the exam day through writing.

>>> Correct

>>>OR: I’m sorry for letting you know in writing  that I'm going to take a short break until the exam day.
I should have talked to you about it yesterday on the phone, but at that time I was not sure whether to stop the class or not.

>>>Correct
Just wait for me about one week please.^^

>>>Correct ( And, absolutely!)
Have good days and see you soon. Bye~~

>>>Correct

 






 

 

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