Alice~ Help me!!!

2013-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Alice I left my phone in my car. My brother got the key of my car. So, I called him, but he didn't answer it. Alice, Could you call me though the phone at home, please. I know it is not available, but I don't want to skip our class, [전화번호] Bye~! Alice ^^ I hope I can talk to you today ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ There you go, I already called you on your telephone number. Hahaha. :D Thanks for sending this emergency message, anyway, to let me know you left your phone in your car. Sleep tight [이름]! Catch you again tomorrow! ~Teacher Alice Hello Alice>> Hello Alice.I left my phone in my car.>> Correct!My brother got the key of my car.>> Correct!So, I called him, but he didn\'t answer it.>> Correct!Alice, Could you call me though the phone at home, please.>> Alice, could you call me through my homephone, please. I know it is not available, but I don\'t want to skip our class,[전화번호].>> Correct!Bye~! Alice ^^>> Bye Alice!^^I hope I can talk to you today ^^ >> Correct!

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