Alien

2022-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'m not believe alien. I think I wants to believe that aliens don\'t exist in this world. Because I don\'t like any scared story. Sometimes, when I watched TV program, they are talk about the UFO and alien topic. and then I was very young it looks like very shocked I can\'t forget that feel still.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann!

Me too. I am scared of the fact that there are other creatures. We are not aware of what they are capable of.

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I\'m not believe alien.
>> I don\'t believe in aliens.

I think I wants to believe that aliens don\'t exist in this world.

>> I think I would rather believe that they don\'t exist in this world.

Because I don\'t like any scared story.

>> It is because I am scared of them.

Sometimes, when I watched TV program, they are talk about the UFO and alien topic.

>> Sometimes when I watch on TV, they usually talk about UFO\'s and aliens.

and then I was very young it looks like very shocked I can\'t forget that feel still.

>> It made me very scared when I was young and I still can\'t forget about it until now.

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