Alienated creature
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name]: Thank you for returning the response form I sent you and recommending Thomas Ward. While he is not exactly the type of person that I am looking for, I will contact him later after I see how my headhunting efforts turn out. In my search, I am forcusing on the management area rather than sales, but I woul not be averse to combining the two in an appropriate postion. This might be possible, particulary, with smeone who has a background in financial services. Please keep me in mind if you hear of any other persons who you think might be qualified. Thanks again for the note and the suggestion. Best regards, Bruce K. Williams. In her book, Who stole Feminism? How Women Have Betrayed Women, Christina Hoff Sommers sounds an alarm. "American feminism is currently dominated by a group of women who seek to persuade the puble that American women are not the free creatures we think we are" she wries. She also believes that such feminists have alienated and silenced many women.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Good job you have completed your homework! I was a little bit confused with your sentence construction but you were able to share your ideas and thoughts! Great! However I want you to practice more so you will get better. Please have time to read the usage of ADVERB CLAUSES. Have a great day!^__^
Dear [Name]. [Name]:
>>CORRECT
Thank you for returning the response form I sent you and recommending Thomas Ward.
>>Correct!
While he is not exactly the type of person that I am looking for, I will contact him later after I see how my headhunting efforts turn out.
>>He is not the type of person I am looking for, but I will call him after I check his resume.
In my search, I am forcusing on the management area rather than sales, but I woul not be averse to combining the two in an appropriate postion. This might be possible, particulary, with smeone who has a background in financial services.
>>I am focusing more on the management position rather than sales. However if an applicant has a financial services background, I might consider him for the position.
Please keep me in mind if you hear of any other persons who you think might be qualified.
>>Please recommend applicants who you know might be qualified.
Thanks again for the note and the suggestion.
>>Thank you again for the note and suggestions.
Best regards, Bruce K. Williams.
>>CORRECT
In her book, Who stole Feminism? How Women Have Betrayed Women, Christina Hoff Sommers sounds an alarm.
>>In her book, Who stole Feminism?:How Women Betrayed Woman, Christina Hoff Sommers sounds an alarm.
\"American feminism is currently dominated by a group of women who seek to persuade the puble that American women are not the free creatures we think we are\" she wries.
>>\"American feminism is currently dominated by a group of women who seek to persuade the public that American womean are not free like we what we think\" she writes.
She also believes that such feminists have alienated and silenced many women.
>>CORRECT
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