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- The goverment guarantees up to 50million won of customers deposits.
- You have to create one more pin number to activate ATM withdrawal.
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T.Sheela
- The goverment guarantees up to 50million won of customers deposits.>>The goverment guarantees up to 50 million won of customers\' to deposits.- You have to create one more pin number to activate ATM withdrawal.
>> You have to create one more pin number to activate your ATM withdrawal.
>>OR You have to create one more pin number to be able to withdraw from your ATM.
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