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3.korea origami
Around 10 years korea origami develope many ways. there are large korea origami comunity ,too.
iwould like to introduce my origamiblog and flickr
my blog: http://blog.naver.com/tjrgus9967 -maybe you can't under stand Korean..
my flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/59154553@N02/ i started just few days ago
i don't intend to write my composition 3times
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3.korea origami
Around 10 years korea origami develope many ways. there are large korea origami comunity ,too.
>>In 10 years, Korea developed Origami in many ways, and we also have a large Korean Origami too.
iwould like to introduce my origamiblog and flickr
>>I would like to introduce you my origami blog and flicker.
my blog: http://blog.naver.com/tjrgus9967 -maybe you can't under stand Korean..
my flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/59154553@N02/
Around 10 years korea origami develope many ways. there are large korea origami comunity ,too.
>>In 10 years, Korea developed Origami in many ways, and we also have a large Korean Origami too.
iwould like to introduce my origamiblog and flickr
>>I would like to introduce you my origami blog and flicker.
my blog: http://blog.naver.com/tjrgus9967 -maybe you can't under stand Korean..
my flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/59154553@N02/
i started just few days ago
>>correct!
i don't intend to write my composition 3times
>>correct!
i don't intend to write my composition 3times
>>correct!
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