all about origami
학생이 쓴 원문
attrative,creative and passionative activity ,Origami.
i 'll introduce you all about origami..
origami is an art that just use square paper without sissors and glue
1.history.
japanese used to enjoy origami for long time. as time passes ,japan met alot of countries and origami spread to other countries.
because of limit of this essay, i will upload it nextday's essay
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for the composition you sent me my dear..
Im glad to hear that you enjoy this art...
Just continue doing this art for this will make you a much creative person.
Ill talk to you again tomorrow my dear..
T.Cam
attrative,creative and passionative activity ,Origami.>>An attractive, creative and passionate activity, Origami.
i 'll introduce you all about origami..
>>Ill introduce origami to you.
origami is an art that just use square paper without sissors and glue
>>Origami is an art of folding and using square papers without sissors and glue.
1.history.
japanese used to enjoy origami for long time.
i 'll introduce you all about origami..
>>Ill introduce origami to you.
origami is an art that just use square paper without sissors and glue
>>Origami is an art of folding and using square papers without sissors and glue.
1.history.
japanese used to enjoy origami for long time.
>>correct!
as time passes ,japan met alot of countries and origami spread to other countries.
>>As time passed by, Japanese met a lot of different people and this art was spread to different countries.
because of limit of this essay, i will upload it nextday's essay
>>As time passed by, Japanese met a lot of different people and this art was spread to different countries.
because of limit of this essay, i will upload it nextday's essay
>>Because of limited characters, Ill upload the rests of the composition for the next day.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.