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This policy will be abolished soon because it is an irrational and ignorant policy.
Futhermore it is uneconomical and impractical.
Schools have to exist not takecare service facilities but educational institutions.
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Ms. [이름]!
I like the way you are very frank in expressing your opinion! Haha! well, you have the right to do that because you are an educator yourself.
See you later:)
Aki~
This policy will be abolished soon because it is an irrational and ignorant policy.
>>> CORRECT!
Furthermore, it is uneconomical and impractical.
Furthermore, it is uneconomical and impractical.
>>> CORRECT!
Schools have to exist not take care service facilities but educational institutions
Schools have to exist not take care service facilities but educational institutions
>>> Schools exist not for care service facilities but educational institutions.
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