All of my activity is that I can show my professionalism to other people.
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you show professionalism at work?
You know that I am living in the Germany as sales engineer. This meaning is that I work as a sales person with engineering background. As far as I know there are few people who have a good language skill with engineering background. So I can say that I have a professionalism about my work. So all of my activity is that I can show my professionalism to other people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. Having a sense of professionalism is indeed a positive trait when it comes to work.
- T. Beth
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You know that I am living in the Germany as sales engineer. >>> OR: As you may know, I am living in Germany as a sales engineer.
This meaning is that I work as a sales person with engineering background.
>>> This means that I work as a sales person with engineering background.
As far as I know there are few people who have a good language skill with engineering background.
>>> As far as I know, there are few people who have a good language skill with an engineering background.
So I can say that I have a professionalism about my work.
>>> So I can say that I have a sense professionalism in my work.
So all of my activity is that I can show my professionalism to other people.
>>> So in all of my activities, I can show my professionalism to other people.
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