All university students should be required to take basic science course even if science is not a par

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Some of students having other majors except for science are required to study basic science.

>> Some students who are not Science majors are required to take or study basic Science.

However, it is not good way to coerce all students to take the course.

>> However, it is not a good way to coerce all the students to take the course.
First of all, there is a student who do not need science knowledge.

>> As a matter of fact, some students do not need Science.

For example, science is not useful for students who majored in chinese-classics or politics.

>> For example, those students taking up Chinese-classics or politics don\'t need Science.

If a university makes electives about basic science for students who don\'t major in science, those who need the course will take the course.

>> The universities should only include Science as one of their elective subjects in the university.
Second, it would be a time-wasting and limits the right of a student.

>> In addition, it\'s time consuming and it limits the rights of students.

This is because, if student have to take the basic science course, they must consume their credit to enroll the course, and they cannot take other courses they want to take as much as used credit to take the science course.

>> Students can\'t take other subjects that are related to their major because of some subjects in Science.

It might be better to take other course instead of science course for them.

>> It a good idea to take other courses than taking up Science subjects.
In conclusion, compelling is always not a good way, and we can create other fashion to teach student basic science.

>> In conclusion, it\'s not a good idea to compel the students to take Science.