Allergy
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I think the worst of allergy that i don’t want to eat it. For example, i don’t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when i turned 16, i became allergic to honeydew. So i don’t it anymore. Another reason, i don’t experience taste which i had allergy food. When many people say “it’s very delicious”, i feel sad because i don’t eat them.
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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
I think the worst of allergy that I don’t want to eat it.
>> I think the worst kind of allergy is food allergy.
For example, I don’t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew.
>> For example, I can\'t eat Korean melon even if it\'s my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew.
So I don’t it anymore.
>> So I don’t eat it anymore.
Another reason, I don’t experience taste which I had allergy food.
>> Another reason, I don’t get the chance to experience the taste which I am allergic to.
When many people say “it’s very delicious”, I feel sad because I don’t eat them.
>> CORRECT!
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