allery
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I don\"t have allery but If I have it i will do this things.
First, I will eat a medicine and rest. Also i will cool down my body. So I can feel normal. because of coolin down my body.
Second, If allery is to serious i will visit to a doctor. So my dotcor can fix my problems. And also take more medicine for a doctor.
That\'s the thins that i will do if I have allergys
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Hello there [이름]!
I think that you have a brilliant plan to solve your allergy. You are right about consulting a doctor immediately because some allergies can be fatal and can lead to death.
You wrote a very good essay. Below are a few missing words and some grammar points you can improve on your writing. I must say that you have a very clear thinking and concrete solutions. Keep up the good work. I hope to see you again in class.
Study hard! See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> I don\'t have allergy but If I have it I will do these things.
First, I will eat a medicine and rest.
>> First, I will take in medicine and rest.
Also i will cool down my body. So I can feel normal. because of coolin down my body.
>> Also I will cool down my body so I can feel normal.
Second, If allery is to serious i will visit to a doctor.
>> Second, if my allergy is to serious, I will visit a doctor.
So my dotcor can fix my problems.
>> Correct!
And also take more medicine for a doctor.
>> And also, the doctor can prescribe more medicine.
That\'s the thins that i will do if I have allergys
>> Those are the things that I will do if I have allergies.
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