Ally could you please corect my email.?
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Dear [Name],
Regarding back orders, please let me know the schedule of the expected shipping date by item if the whole item would not be shipped before your holiday.
As a part of solution of 980A-S issue, can you please help accommodate us by giving 100 pairs of M2180A-S at the cost of 980A-S price? So that we could appease our customers by convincing the second-best things.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
No problem, Louis. ^^
I\'ll attach the corrected version below.
~t. Ally
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Dear [Name],
Regarding the back orders, please let me know the schedule of the expected shipping date by item if the whole batch could not be shipped before your holiday.
As a part of solution of 980A-S issue, could you please help accommodate us by giving 100 pairs of M2180A-S at the cost of 980A-S\'s price? So that we could appease our customers by convincing them of the second best items we could provide.
Thank you.
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