Ally, Please help me~.
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Hi Louis!
Sure thing. ^^
~~t. Ally
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Dear [Name],
>>CORRECT!
Concerning the frozen tissues are expected to arrive here in Korea tomorrow, I discovered some imminent expiry date of tissues from the packing list as below.
KFDA strictly requires tissue banks to distribute tissues valid expiring after at least 6 months.
>> Regarding the frozen tissues: They are expected to arrive here in Korea tomorrow. I have discovered some tissues from the list below that are close to their expiration date. KFDA strictly requires the tissue banks to distribute tissues with an expiration date that is valid after at least 6 months.
Tissues from number 1 to number 4 are unsuitable to our SOP and we would not register on HUTIS (KFDA\'s database) since they are non conforming to the requirement of KFDA
And it seems to be difficult to consume tissues with the expiration date of August and September considering the delivery time to hospitals and the period of consignment at hospitals.
>> Tissues from number 1-4 are not suitable with our company\'s SOP and we will not register them to HUTIS (KFDA\'s database), since they do not conform to the requirement of KFDA.
It would be difficult to consume tissues that will expire on August and September, considering the delivery time to hospitals and the period of consignment from the hospitals as well.
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