Almost everyone has had at least one teacher who is hard to forget. Tell me about what makes it so h

2016-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I still remember my Korean teacher in middle school. She was so kind and friendly. Our school was the first one for her to start her career as a Korean teacher right after graduating from college. She was empathic. She had the ability to bond with her students, to understand and resonate with their feelings and emotions. She has tried hard to communicate on our level and to compassionate with us when we were down and to celebrate with us when we were up. Even for those who graduated, she kept writing letters to them to encourage and give them hope when they were in darkness. She kept maintaining smile on her face when things got tough. She’s tried to see the bright side of things and see the good in her young people. She was open and willing to listen to her students’ voice. She was the window through which many young students could see their futures. She was a fine role model as a lot of young students didn’t have anyone to look up to in the role in the small town.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for your time. ^^
I appreciate that you told me a lot of things about your Korean teacher,
For me, I won\'t forget my first year high school teacher,

She taught me how to believe in myself.

Until now, I still find time to meet her,

I treat her like my second mother.

Have a great night,

Teacher Nina


I still remember my Korean teacher in middle school.

>> correct

She was so kind and friendly.

>> correct

Our school was the first one for her to start her career as a Korean teacher right after graduating from college.

>> correct

>> OR: Being a Korean teacher in our school was her very first job.

She was empathic.

>> correct

She had the ability to bond with her students, to understand and resonate with their feelings and emotions.

>> correct

She has tried hard to communicate on our level and to compassionate with us when we were down and to celebrate with us when we were up.

>> She has tried hard to communicate on our level and be compassionate with us when we were down and to celebrate with us when we were up.

Even for those who graduated, she kept writing letters to them to encourage and give them hope when they were in darkness.

>> correct

She kept maintaining smile on her face when things got tough.

>> She kept maintaining a smile on her face when things got tough.

She’s tried to see the bright side of things and see the good in her young people.

>> She’s tried to see the bright side of things and see the good in her students.

>> OR: She’s tried to see the bright side of things and see the good in the younger generation.

She was open and willing to listen to her students’ voice.

>> correct

She was the window through which many young students could see their futures.

>> She was the window through which many young students could see their future.

She was a fine role model as a lot of young students didn’t have anyone to look up to in the role in the small town.

>> She was a fine role model as a lot of young students didn’t have anyone to look up to in the small town.

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