Almost job make a great contribution to the society.
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Almost job make a great contribution to the society.
>>Almost all of the jobs make a great contribution to the society.
I do not agree the opinion that doctors, nurses, teachers should be paid more.
>>I do not agree to the opinion that doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more.
Because all job has some difficulty and makes a great contribution to the society.
>>Because not all of the jobs are easy and every job can make a great contribution to the society.
It is not unfair to raise their salary except other jobs.
>>It is not fair to raise their salaries except for the other jobs.
And raising their salary causes to tax and medical expense increase.
>>Raising their salaries may cause the increase on the tax and medical expenses.
The medical and educational service should be based on public grounds.
>>The medical and educational services should be based on public grounds.
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