Almost or absolutely

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby :) Oh, I almost forgot this. Maybe absolutely... haha I feel that I'm becoming lazy sometimes. As I've got to remember a memory, to draw a picture of a past in my brain is a first section of sequence. Unfortunately, I can't think in English right away. First of all, I need to think about that in Korean. And then I need to transfer Korean words into English words. But I wish I would be able to think in English right away. <Essay> Of course it is the news about Sewor-ho I think. It has been 100 days more, but it still comes out in news. A lot of people died, so it can be. I hope an acident like this don't happen again.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ You are getting forgetful! hahahahaha... Are you getting old? hahahha.. I\'m kidding!^^ I\'m also forgetful but I don\'t forget students who send me homework everyday!^^ kkkkkk Well, to translate is easy but to have an immediate reaction in English is challenging. English is not your mother tongue and so are your reactions when asked questions! Of course you don\'t say \"ouch!\" when you get hurt. You use the korean word for pain. The reactions of a person is instinctive. You can develop this skill and in time you can do it! For now the idea of doing it is good for you so you have the idea on what would be your goal! Take care! T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi Debby :)>> CORRECT Or> Hey there teacher!^^Oh, I almost forgot this.  >> CORRECT OR> I nearly got forgetful. Maybe absolutely... haha I feel that I\'m becoming lazy sometimes.>> CORRECT OR> I feel that I\'m getting lazy sometimes.As I\'ve got to remember a memory, to draw a picture of a past in my brain is a first section of sequence. >> CORRECT OR> As I remember, thinkng of a picture from the past is the first thing in a process. Unfortunately, I can\'t think in English right away. >> CORRECT OR> the downside is I cannot think in English fast.  First of all, I need to think about that in Korean. >> CORRECT OR> The first thing that I do is think about that in Korean. And then I need to transfer Korean words into English words. >> CORRECT Or> Then I have to translate the words into English. But I wish I would be able to think in English right away. >> CORRECT OR> I wish I have the ability to think in English right away.<Essay>Of course it is the news about Sewor-ho I think. >> CORRECT Or> I\'d have to say that it\'s the Sewor-ho incident. It has been 100 days more, but it still comes out in news. >> I had been more that 100 days but it\'s still on the news.  A lot of people died, so it can be. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s possible because a lot of people passed away. I hope an acident like this don\'t happen again. >> I hope an accident like this won\'t happen again.  

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