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Hello! Debby
As you said, I plan to search a English drama to improve my listening skill. I'm thinking to watch CSI. I felt this is a good thing to enhance my skill. But I'm worried about hard words like scientific or technical term.
And singing a English song is that I'm doing these days. Since I had an interest in English music, I often find the lyrics and sing the songs from time to time. I feel this improved my listening skill a lot.
I'm going to meet a foreigner as a member of I-Friend program that communicate with foreigners. We're going to go eat a lunch. Maybe I should teach him how to use the ticket machine to chose a food because this is put down in Korean. I'm a little nervous but I will keep in mind your advice.
Take care :)
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I have a experience to take an umbrella inside a building. I didn't know first why people were seeing me. But I noticed soon. This can't be happend again! I think I should be awake in any time.
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Hi there [이름]! ^^
I can\'t stop laughing from your experience.^^
That really is embarrassing. I hope you won\'t do it again. Keep your eyes open and not your umbrella. :)
Let\'s just say you have that experience for the memory and to remind you to be alert. hahahahaha ^^
Thank you for sharing. Just be comfortable with your friend and the flow of conversation will be fine.
It\'s good that you mean to teach him something useful. I\'m sure that would always remind him of you.
Do not worry about the terms frm the show. Make a point to understand their conversations and the idea of the show. You may not
be able to have the vocabulary right away but you can enhance comprehension and read body language of foreigners.^^
Do your best and keep up with the songs. Do two things with the English songs. You can both practice listening and singing.^^
How about that? :)
Try the song Lemon tree.^^
Take care.^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hello! Debby>> CORRECTAs you said, I plan to search a English drama to improve my listening skill.
>> As you said, I plan to search an English drama to improve my listening skill.
I\'m thinking to watch CSI.
>> CORRECT
Or> I\'m considering CSI.
I felt this is a good thing to enhance my skill.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think this would help me improve my skills.
But I\'m worried about hard words like scientific or technical term.
>> CORRECT
OR> Thinking about scientific or technical terms bothers me.And singing a English song is that I\'m doing these days.
>> And singing an English song is that I\'m doing these days.
Since I had an interest in English music, I often find the lyrics and sing the songs from time to time.
>> CORRECT
OR> I often look for music that I can sing from time to time.
I feel this improved my listening skill a lot.>> CORRECT
OR> This had helped me with my listening skills.I\'m going to meet a foreigner as a member of I-Friend program that communicate with foreigners.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will connect with a foreigner in I-Friend since I am a member.
We\'re going to go eat a lunch.
>> CORRECT
OR> We will have lunch together.
Maybe I should teach him how to use the ticket machine to chose a food because this is put down in Korean.
>> Maybe I should teach him how to use the ticket machine to choose food because this is in Korean.
I\'m a little nervous but I will keep in mind your advice.>> I\'m a little nervous but I will keep your advice in mind.Take care :)<Essay>I have a experience to take an umbrella inside a building.
>> I have an experience taking an umbrella inside a building.
I didn\'t know first why people were seeing me.
>> At first, I did not know why people were looking at me.
But I noticed soon.
>> But I noticed it soon.
This can\'t be happend again! I think I should be awake in any time.
>> This can\'t happen again! I think I should be awake any time.
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