Am I right track?!
학생이 쓴 원문
These day, I have a lot of think.
I don\'t know about what is my final purpose.
When I start this class first time, I told you my final goal is broadway show.
But now I don\'t know perfectly.
Just time is ticking everyday thinking myself and am I right track wonder.
But I know, usually I\'m well done this time too.
I have a lot of job, vocal traineer, musical actor, singer.
Sometimes it come to me very confussed
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Yes, I remember that you told me that but sometimes things don\'t go the way we want it to. There will always be hardships but I know that in the end, you would realize what your real purpose is. I will be very happy if I can witness that :)
These day, I have a lot of think.
>> These days, I have a lot of think.
I don\'t know about what is my final purpose.
>> I don\'t know what my main purpose in life it.
When I start this class first time, I told you my final goal is broadway show.
>> When I started having this class, I told you that my final goal is to enter the Broadway show.
But now I don\'t know perfectly.
>> But now, I don\'t know perfectly.
Just time is ticking everyday thinking myself and am I right track wonder.
>> As time ticks everyday, I think to myself whether I am still on the right track.
But I know, usually I\'m well done this time too.
>> But I know that I am doing well right now.
I have a lot of job, vocal traineer, musical actor, singer.
>> I have a lot of jobs such as being a vocal trainer, musical actor and singer.
Sometimes it come to me very confussed
>> Sometimes I get very confused about it.
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