Am I satisfied with my personality?

2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I am satisfied with my personality. I am usually calm and silent especially at work. I think this personality is appropriate to my job, teacher because teacher should always check whether everyone is okay. And talking too many things always makes problem. So, I think silence is better than too much talking However, it is inconvenient that to being silent and introverted as I want to make a new relationship with others. But I am still satisfied with my personality because each personality has strength and weekness. So, I am trying to complement the weekness of my personality.

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I am satisfied with my personality.

>> CORRECT


I am usually calm and silent especially at work.

>> CORRECT


I think this personality is appropriate to my job, teacher because teacher should always check whether everyone is okay.

>> I think this personality is appropriate for my job as a teacher because teachers should always check whether everyone is okay.


And talking too many things always makes problem.

>> Also, talking about too many things always result to problems.


So, I think silence is better than too much talking

>> So, I think silence is better than talking too much.


However, it is inconvenient that to being silent and introverted as I want to make a new relationship with others.

>> However, it is inconvenient for people who are silent and introverted like me, as I want to make new relationships with others.


But I am still satisfied with my personality because each personality has strength and weekness.

>> Nevertheless, I am still satisfied with my personality because each personality has strength and weakness.


So, I am trying to complement the weekness of my personality.

>> So, I am trying to complement the weakness of my personality.

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