Am I satisfied with my personality?
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I am satisfied with my personality.
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I am usually calm and silent especially at work.
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I think this personality is appropriate to my job, teacher because teacher should always check whether everyone is okay.
>> I think this personality is appropriate for my job as a teacher because teachers should always check whether everyone is okay.
And talking too many things always makes problem.
>> Also, talking about too many things always result to problems.
So, I think silence is better than too much talking
>> So, I think silence is better than talking too much.
However, it is inconvenient that to being silent and introverted as I want to make a new relationship with others.
>> However, it is inconvenient for people who are silent and introverted like me, as I want to make new relationships with others.
But I am still satisfied with my personality because each personality has strength and weekness.
>> Nevertheless, I am still satisfied with my personality because each personality has strength and weakness.
So, I am trying to complement the weekness of my personality.
>> So, I am trying to complement the weakness of my personality.
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