Amazing Animals{1/13, My homework}
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This is [Name] j[이름]fish in a Great Barrier Reef.
Cephalic j[이름]fish is called Sea hornet, too.
Cephalic j[이름]fish is so scared because you might die if that bite.
At 2019 October, there was a giant a swarm of j[이름]fish in Korea.
Many people get bitten by j[이름]fish.
Most people die because they took the wrong first aid.
I\'m scared of j[이름]fish but it was amazing.
That is amazing and scared!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. Happy Monday!
Cheers!
Jean
This is [Name] j[이름]fish in a Great Barrier Reef.
>> This is a Cephalic j[이름]fish in the Great Barrier Reef.
Cephalic j[이름]fish is called Sea hornet, too.
>> correct
>> or: Cephalic j[이름]fish is also called Sea hornet.
Cephalic j[이름]fish is so scared because you might die if that bite.
>> Cephalic j[이름]fish is so scary because you might die if you get bitten.
At 2019 October, there was a giant a swarm of j[이름]fish in Korea.
>> In 2019 October, there was a giant a swarm of j[이름]fish in Korea. [Sounds scary!]
Many people get bitten by j[이름]fish.
>> Many people got bitten by j[이름]fish.
Most people die because they took the wrong first aid.
>> Most people died because they took the wrong first aid.
I\'m scared of j[이름]fish but it was amazing.
>> I\'m scared of j[이름]fish but it looks amazing.
That is amazing and scared!
>> That creature looks amazing but scary!
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