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If you want to explore real natural world, I would like to recommend Amazon. I have been there in February. 2020 right before Corona started to spread all over the world. Many people think that rainforest is dangerous and don\'t try. But it is not dangerous if you follow some guidelines. I could explore intact natural world and had unique experience there. Thanks to the traveling,I could endure the thirsty of traveling when I couldn\'t visit abroad because of the pandemic.
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If you want to explore real natural world, I would like to recommend Amazon.
>> I recommend Amazon if you want to explore the real natural world.
I have been there in February.
>> I went there in February.
2020 right before Corona started to spread all over the world.
>> 2020, just before Corona began to spread throughout the world.
Many people think that rainforest is dangerous and don\'t try.
>> Many people think the rainforest is dangerous and therefore don\'t go there.
But it is not dangerous if you follow some guidelines.
>>But if some precautions are taken, it is not dangerous.
I could explore intact natural world and had unique experience there.
>> I could explore the natural world in its entirety and have unique experiences.
Thanks to the traveling, I could endure the thirsty of traveling when I couldn\'t visit abroad because of the pandemic.
>> Because of travel, I was able to satisfy my thirst for travel when I couldn\'t visit abroad due to the pandemic.
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