Ambition that can realize or not
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir,
Glad to see you back here sir. I think you\'d be able to achieve your goals \'cause their achievable. Plus you are genuinely interested so I know you\'ll be able to do it. Go for it sir! See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I am too old to have an ambition.
>>correct!
But I have a couple of goals.
>>correct!
At first, I want to write a book every year.
>>correct!
I have already written two books.
>>correct!
I don\'t have time too busy to write a book this year.
>>I don\'t have time this year because I\'m too busy.
Next year I have a plan to write a book.
>>Next year, I\'m planning to write another book.
Therefore I will write ten books.
>>I would like to write ten books.
Second, I have plans to doctoral degree.
>>Secondly, I have a plan to take my doctoral degree.
I want to study about Korean traditional culture.
>>correct!
My scholarly interest is Korean\'s folk and mountain god and ancient his(hers)tory.
>>correct!
I think I will be able to write a some books.
>>I think I will be able to write some books about this.
But I wonder that I will realize to enter a doctoral degree.
>>But I wonder if I will be able to finish my doctoral degree.
That is not ambition but my goal.
>>This is not my ambition but rather my goal.
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