Ambition that can realize or not

2016-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I am too old to have a ambition. But I have a couple of goals. At first, I want to write a book every year. I have already written two books. I don't have time too busy to write a book this year. Next year I have a plan to write a book. Therefore I will write ten books. Second, I have plans to doctoral degree. I want to study about Korean traditional culture. My scholarly interest is Korean's folk and mountain god and ancient his(hers)tory. I think I will be able to write a some books. But I wonder that I will realize to enter a doctoral degree. That is not ambition but my goal.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir,

Glad to see you back here sir. I think you\'d be able to achieve your goals \'cause their achievable. Plus you are genuinely interested so I know you\'ll be able to do it. Go for it sir! See you later!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

I am too old to have an ambition.

>>correct!

But I have a couple of goals.

>>correct!

At first, I want to write a book every year.

>>correct!

I have already written two books.

>>correct!

I don\'t have time too busy to write a book this year.

>>I don\'t have time this year because I\'m too busy.

Next year I have a plan to write a book.

>>Next year, I\'m planning to write another book.

Therefore I will write ten books.

>>I would like to write ten books.

Second, I have plans to doctoral degree.

>>Secondly, I have a plan to take my doctoral degree.

I want to study about Korean traditional culture.

>>correct!

My scholarly interest is Korean\'s folk and mountain god and ancient his(hers)tory.

>>correct!

I think I will be able to write a some books.

>>I think I will be able to write some books about this.

But I wonder that I will realize to enter a doctoral degree.

>>But I wonder if I will be able to finish my doctoral degree.

That is not ambition but my goal.

>>This is not my ambition but rather my goal.

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