Ambivalent of technology
학생이 쓴 원문
Technology can help us escape poverty and disease by promoting the development of transportation, information delivery and medical technology.
On the other hand, considering nuclear weapons, it will unintentionally have negative results.
We know that technology has a double-sided blade.
For example, hitting a ball with a bat or hitting a person.
So if we use it well, it will help us.
Otherwise, it will bring down humans.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
This is a really good analogy that you presented here.
I\'m also happy that you are widening the scope of your study.
Good job on using new expressions.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Technology can help us escape poverty and disease by promoting the development of transportation, information delivery and medical technology.
>> Correct
On the other hand, considering nuclear weapons, it will unintentionally have negative results.
On the other hand, considering nuclear weapons, it will unintentionally have negative results.
>> On the other hand, considering nuclear weapons, it will unintentionally have negative effects.
We know that technology has a double-sided blade.
We know that technology has a double-sided blade.
>> We know that technology is a double-sided blade.
For example, hitting a ball with a bat or hitting a person.
For example, hitting a ball with a bat or hitting a person.
>> Correct
So if we use it well, it will help us.
So if we use it well, it will help us.
>> Correct
Otherwise, it will bring down humans.
Otherwise, it will bring down humans.
>> Correct
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