America
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I was disappointed with watching Trump\'s inauguration.
He is only concerned very dangerous American centrism .
His personality is violent, rude, ignorant and belligerent.
The worst thins is that he never have interests in world peace and earth ecosystem.
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Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
I guess I need to check on that, due to my busy schedule I was not able to watch his inauguration yet.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I was disappointed with watching Trump\'s inauguration.
>>> I was disappointed watching Trump\'s inauguration.
He is only concerned very dangerous American centrism .
>>> He is only concerned with very dangerous American centrism.
His personality is violent, rude, ignorant, and belligerent.
>>> His personality is violent, rude, ignorant and belligerent.
The worst thins is that he never have interests in world peace and earth ecosystem.
>>> The worst thing is that he never has an interest in world peace and the earth\'s ecosystem.
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