American Election
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think about the American election?
I heard that Joe Biden had became United State\'s president.
I heard adoults saying about Joe Biden and they said president Joe Biden has relationships with Japan.
Koreans don\'t like Japan and so do I.
Because Japan had attacked Korea long times ago.
I like president Biden but I don\'t like he had a relationships with Japan!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your 2nd homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think about the American election?
I heard that Joe Biden had became United State\'s president.
>> I heard that Joe Biden has become the new United State\'s new president.
>> or: I heard that Joe Biden won the American election.
I heard adoults saying about Joe Biden and they said president Joe Biden has relationships with Japan.
>> I heard adults talking about Joe Biden and they said that he has relationships with Japan.
>> or: I heard adults say that Biden has dealings with Japan.
Koreans don\'t like Japan and so do I. Because Japan had attacked Korea long times ago.
>> Koreans don\'t like Japan and neither do I because Japan invaded our country a long time ago.
I like president Biden but I don\'t like he had a relationships with Japan!
>> I like president Biden but I don\'t like the fact that he has relationships with Japan!
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