Among the places you have visited, which was your least favorite? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Each travel destination has its own charm; however, for me, it\'s hard to enjoy a trip when I don\'t feel safe.
During a trip to Bali, I stayed in the Canggu area. There was no public transportation system, so people typically used motorcycles to get around.
I went to a rental bike shop and took a lesson on how to ride a motorcycle. After the short lesson, I nervously started the engine and rode for about 10 [이름]utes. However, when I saw a corner, I wasn\'t able to turn the handle and ended up in a ditch along with the motorcycle. Despite the delicious food, char[이름]g attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don\'t want to experience an accident like that again. If I visit Bali again, I would stay in another area that is easier to move around!
강사 첨삭
Hi, MJ. I guess this story was a very memorable one for you! Thank you for sharing it with me. ^^
~ T. Jewel
~ T. Jewel
Each travel destination has its own charm; however, for me, it\'s hard to enjoy a trip when I don\'t feel safe.
>>CORRECT
During a trip to Bali, I stayed in the Canggu area.
>>During a trip to Bali, I stayed in Canggu.
>>CORRECT
During a trip to Bali, I stayed in the Canggu area.
>>During a trip to Bali, I stayed in Canggu.
There was no public transportation system, so people typically used motorcycles to get around.
>>There is no public transportation system there, so people typically use motorcycles to get around.
I went to a rental bike shop and took a lesson on how to ride a motorcycle.
>>CORRECT
After the short lesson, I nervously started the engine and rode for about 10 [이름]utes.
>>CORRECT
However, when I saw a corner, I wasn\'t able to turn the handle and ended up in a ditch along with the motorcycle.
However, when I saw a corner, I wasn\'t able to turn the handle and ended up in a ditch along with the motorcycle.
>>CORRECT
Despite the delicious food, char[이름]g attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don\'t want to experience an accident like that again.
>>CORRECT
or
>>Despite Bali\'s delicious food, char[이름]g tourist attractions, and beautiful beaches, I don\'t want to experience an accident like that ever again.
If I visit Bali again, I would stay in another area that is easier to move around!
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