Among those you are not related to, who has helped you most in your life?
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Most people have the most admiring person. But I haven\'t one. I think there was no one to help me except my family. Every parent gives guidance to their children in general, but it didn\'t to me. A specific case occurred in my childhood. I lost my father when I was in elementary school. I was taught many things by my older brother inevitably. I hated him at that time because he always taught me to till disgusted. I feel grateful to him these days. He is always a good teacher and father figure in my mind. I hope he will be happy for a long time without any pain.
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~ T. CamilleMost people have the most admiring person.
>> CORRECT!
But I haven\'t one.
>> But I don\'t have one.
I think there was no one to help me except my family.
>> CORRECT!
Every parent gives guidance to their children in general, but it didn\'t to me.
>> Every parent gives guidance to their children in general, but it didn\'t happen to me.
A specific case occurred in my childhood.
>> CORRECT!
I lost my father when I was in elementary school.
>> CORRECT!
I was taught many things by my older brother inevitably.
>> CORRECT!
I hated him at that time because he always taught me to till disgusted.
>> I hated him at that time because he always taught me to feel disgusted.
I feel grateful to him these days.
>> I feel grateful for him these days.
He is always a good teacher and father figure in my mind.
>> CORRECT!
I hope he will be happy for a long time without any pain.
>> CORRECT!
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