amusements homework

2021-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Miya

학생이 쓴 원문

1. bumper cars Yes, I\'ve been on a bumper car. 2. roller coaster I go when I go to church or school. 3. Ferris wheel Bumper cars, Ferris wheels, merry-go-rounds, roller coasters, Vikings, Flume Ride, etc.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for answering the homework questions on page 39. But the homework questions that I gave to you on the Student\'s Page is different. :)

This is the Homework questions on the Student\'s Page:

1. Do you enjoy going to amusement parks? Why or why not?

But since you answered the Homework questions on Page 39, I will also give feedbacks on your answer. :) Here it is:

1. Bumper cars
Yes, I\'ve been on a bumper car.

2. Roller coaster
Your answer: I go when I go to church or school.

Correct answer/s: Yes, I like riding the roller coaster. | No, I don\'t like riding the roller coaster.

3. Ferris wheel
Your answer: Bumper cars, Ferris wheels, merry-go-rounds, roller coasters, Vikings, Flume Ride, etc.

Correct answer/s: I like riding the Ferris wheel very much. | I don\'t like riding the Ferris wheel very much.

If you have any more questions about the lesson, please feel free to send me a message or ask me about it in class. :)

Thank you and good night! See you on Friday. :)

~Teacher Miya^^

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