An Absurd Reason To Study English: Vanity
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Why should a middle-aged man sign up telephone English service? Even he is an ex-reporter and a novelist-he hasn't need a foreign language doing those jobs.
In Korea, educated one easily get to regard himself as an extra who cannot but take minor roles living on the margins of globalized age. It's like that the U.S. is the new Rome of our era, and Korean seems just skillful copycats.
Is it too sarcastic? Agree or not, this is why I study English. I have started dreaming of going to the U.S. someday and learning academics like Economics, taking a taste that I'm in the center of the world. Maybe just a few month's training program in the college might be enough to me. Or I could learn more. I don't know now.
This weird but firm motive is my strength. And my weakness is that I have not lived more than 6 months outside of Korea in total. Do you know Korean is the most different language from English? I must think differently entirely. I hope POWER ENGLISH will help me a lot.
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Hi there, Sir [이름]!Thank you for your composition! Wow! You really are a writer! I can\'t wait to read more of your writings! I\'m sure that checking your homework will always be an interesting activity for me! Anyway, you have this strong drive that will push you to the end. You have the necessary skills to communicate in English, so polishing them will be our target. I hope you won\'t hesitate to share your opinions, to raise queries, and to give suggestions. Teamwork is essential for your improvement, so let\'s work together for our target. We can do it! Take care and seize the day!
T. JanE ^^
Why should a middle-aged man sign up telephone English service?
>> Why should a middle-aged man sign up to a telephone English service?
Even he is an ex-reporter and a novelist-he hasn\'t need a foreign language doing those jobs.
>> Even though he is an ex-reporter and a novelist, he doesn\'t need a foreign language to do those jobs.In Korea, educated one easily get to regard himself as an extra who cannot but take minor roles living on the margins of globalized age.
>> In Korea, an educated one easily gets to regard himself as an extra who cannot but take minor roles living on the margins of globalized age.
It\'s like that the U.S. is the new Rome of our era, and Korean seems just skillful copycats.
>> It\'s like the U.S. is the new Rome of our era, and Koreans seem to be just skillful copycats.Is it too sarcastic? Agree or not, this is why I study English.
>> Correct
I have started dreaming of going to the U.S. someday and learning academics like Economics, taking a taste that I\'m in the center of the world.
>> I have started dreaming of going to the U.S. someday to learn academics like Economics, and to take a taste of being in the center of the world.
Maybe just a few month\'s training program in the college might be enough to me.
>> Maybe, just a few months of a training program in college might be enough for me.
Or I could learn more.
>> Correct I don\'t know now.
>> Correct
This weird but firm motive is my strength.
>> Correct
And my weakness is that I have not lived more than 6 months outside of Korea in total.
>> And my weakness is that I have not lived for more than 6 months outside of Korea.
Do you know Korean is the most different language from English?
>> Did you know that Korean is totally a different language from English?
I must think differently entirely.
>> I must think entirely differently.
I hope POWER ENGLISH will help me a lot. >> Correct
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