An actor's scandal of drug

2010-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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It turned out a famous actor, Kim Sung-min, purchase drugs abroad and smuggle it to Korea. He admitted those suspicions, according to the prosecutor. Using drug is not a big issue anymore compared to early 1990 because more people get information about drug and they know it is easy to get in abroad or even in Korea. Celebrities are more likely to use it since living as a celebrity is very difficult. For example, they always try to appear their good sides on TV. It may make them feel awful from the difference between in real and on TV. So, they might want to have something they can escape from the real world. Anyway, I think his sentence would be longer than others because he was the dealer for smuggling.

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Hello [이름], Great work. Have a great evening and talk to you again tomorrow. -RJ    It turned out a famous actor, Kim Sung-min, purchase drugs abroad and smuggle it to Korea. >>It turned out a famous actor, Kim Sung-min, purchased drugs abroad and smuggle it in Korea. He admitted those suspicions, according to the prosecutor. >>He admitted those suspicions were true, according to the prosecutor. Using drug is not a big issue anymore compared to early 1990 because more people get information about drug and they know it is easy to get in abroad or even in Korea. >>Using drugs is not a big issue anymore compared to the early 1990's because more people are familiar with drugs and they know it is easy to get abroad and even in Korea. Celebrities are more likely to use it since living as a celebrity is very difficult. >>correct For example, they always try to appear their good sides on TV. >>For example, they always try to show their good sides on TV. It may make them feel awful from the difference between in real and on TV. >>It may make them feel awful from real life and on TV. So, they might want to have something they can escape from the real world. >>So, they might want to have something they can use to escape from the real world. Anyway, I think his sentence would be longer than others because he was the dealer for smuggling. >>correct

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