An animal that I want to be
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If I could be an animal,I want to be an eagle beacause eagle\'s vison is 5.0 and they are at the very top of the food chain. Also they do not
miss prey.
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If I could be an animal,I want to be an eagle beacause eagle\'s vison is
5.0 and they are at the very top of the food chain. Also they do not miss prey.
>> If I could be an animal, I want to be an eagle because of it\'s 5.0 vision and they are on the top of the food/ at the very top of the food chain. They also didn\'t miss when hunting for a prey.
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