An application on a phone / computer -Part3
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1. Which phone app is the most popular in your country?
As I said before, KakaoTalk is one of the most common and favorite smartphone applications in Korea. While some people use other apps such as Instagram or Facebook, I am more partial to KakaoTalk, and I consider this as the leading app in my country. Also, Apple users don\'t like to use the app less frequently. Except for iPhone users, there is no app more famous than Kakaotalk in Korea.
4. Do you think some apps will help people to study?
Based on my experience, I would say \'yes\' because I constantly use online dictionaries in English studies. They can be very helpful in terms of checking new words or learning their exact pronunciation. There are many apps that English learners use, such as Duolingo or Hello Talk. The podcast is also another very effective and popular app among English learners.
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1. Which phone app is the most popular in your country?
As I said before, KakaoTalk is one of the most common and favorite smartphone applications in Korea. While some people use other apps such as Instagram or Facebook, I am more partial to KakaoTalk, and I consider this as the leading app in my country.
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Also, Apple users don\'t like to use the app less frequently. Except for iPhone users, there is no app more famous than Kakaotalk in Korea.
>> Also, Apple users use the app less frequently, but except for them, there is no app more famous than Kakaotalk in Korea.
4. Do you think some apps will help people to study?
Based on my experience, I would say \'yes\' because I constantly use online dictionaries in English studies.
>> Based on my experience, I would say \'yes\' because I constantly use online dictionaries in my English studies.
They can be very helpful in terms of checking new words or learning their exact pronunciation. There are many apps that English learners use, such as Duolingo or Hello Talk. The podcast is also another very effective and popular app among English learners.
>> correct
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