An enjoyable dinner Part 2, #1
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2. What\'s the difference between eating at home and eating out on special occasions?
Generally, people want to share food with their intimate friends, family, and relatives. That’s why it’s not only sharing foods but sharing the memory, emotional feelings, and experience at the event. Foods can alleviate the strict mood before an official meeting or a social bond between peoples, so people usually prepare foods for private events or official meetings.
3.What nation identity can be seen in a nation\'s culinary?
In the past, many people tried to make foods for celebration in family events because they believed much effort by family members could make delicious foods. However, nowadays, the family composition has been getting a nuclear type family, so younger families are more likely to eat out at special events. Actually, now, maybe it’s because many parents have to work day in and day out, so they have a little time to freely do something.
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2. What\'s the difference between eating at home and eating out on special occasions?
Generally, people want to share food with their intimate friends, family, and relatives.
>> correct
That’s why it’s not only sharing foods but sharing the memory, emotional feelings, and experience at the event.
>> That\'s why eating is not only about sharing food but also sharing memories, feelings, and experiences at the event.
Foods can alleviate the strict mood before an official meeting or a social bond between peoples, so people usually prepare foods for private events or official meetings.
>> Food can alleviate the tense mood before an official meeting or a social gathering, so people usually prepare something to eat or drink at private events or official meetings.
3.What nation identity can be seen in a nation\'s culinary?
In the past, many people tried to make foods for celebration in family events because they believed much effort by family members could make delicious foods.
>> In the past, many people tried to make food during celebrations or family events because they believed that everything becomes more delicious when they joined efforts to prepare the food.
However, nowadays, the family composition has been getting a nuclear type family, so younger families are more likely to eat out at special events.
>> However, nowadays, a nuclear type of family has become more common, so younger families are more likely to eat out when there are special events.
Actually, now, maybe it’s because many parents have to work day in and day out, so they have a little time to freely do something.
>> Actually, now, maybe it’s because many parents have to work day in and day out, so they have little time to freely do something.
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