An essay
학생이 쓴 원문
'He that can have patience can have what he will.'
~ Benjamin Franklin
Above quotation is really good meaning and I agree.
But sometimes I can't have patience.
My collegue who is in the management dept. talks too much everytime.
I have to spend so many times to talk with him.
Of course he talks with anyone for several hours.
I can bear only 30 minutes to hear his words.
But I cannot stand his everlasting talk.
After a while my patience is worn out at last.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julie,
Happy Friday to you!
Thank you so much for sending this and sharing your experience.
I really agree with there are some people who are really like that.
They don\'t care if they are annoying you or not.
They are not sensitive enough to consider your feelings.
If you are irritated or not.
Well see you in class.
Take care always!
~Teacher Theresa
\'He that can have patience can have what he will.\' ~ Benjamin Franklin
Above quotation is really good meaning and I agree.>> The above quotation has a really good meaning and I agree with it.But sometimes I can\'t have patience.
>> But sometimes I can\'t have the patience.My collegue who is in the management dept. talks too much everytime.
>> My colleague who is in the management dept. talks too much every time I talked to him.I have to spend so many times to talk with him.
>> I have to spend a lot of time just to talk with him.Of course he talks with anyone for several hours.
>> Correct.I can bear only 30 minutes to hear his words.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I can only bear 30 minutes of listening to his words or stories.But I cannot stand his everlasting talk.
>> DID YOU MEAN: But I cannot stand his everlasting talkativeness.After a while my patience is worn out at last.
>> Correct.
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