An essay

2014-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Theresa

학생이 쓴 원문

'Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair, but manifestations of strength and resolution.' - Kahlil Gibran - Before I thought the strength is good. But my thought was changed that the tendernes & kindness is better. I respected the person who is kind and tender. All pay attention in front of the person who is rude and wild. But they don't like him although he has power. On the other hand all like the person who is kind. As the saying goes "Too strong, it will be broken easily.".

강사 첨삭

Hi Julie, Thank you sending this. I really appreciate your effort. Please take care always! ~Teacher Theresa \'Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair, but manifestations of strength and resolution.\' - Kahlil Gibran -Before I thought the strength is good. >> Before I thought that having the strength was good.But my thought was changed that the tendernes & kindness is better. >> But my thought was changed that having the tenderness & kindness is better.I respected the person who is kind and tender. >> I respect the person who is kind and tender.All pay attention in front of the person who is rude and wild. >> DID YOU MEAN: All that I am paying attention when I am in front of that person is how their rude and wild they are.But they don\'t like him although he has power. >> But they don\'t like him although he has the power.On the other hand all like the person who is kind. >> Correct.As the saying goes \"Too strong, it will be broken easily.\". >> Correct.

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