An essay

2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Theresa

학생이 쓴 원문

'You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.' - Dr. [Name] I met a man when I was 22 years old in University. He was very kind and loved me so much. At that time I liked to be with him all the time. At night he always walked me home and we talked over telephone until he returned home. Sometimes he and I talked over telephone till dawn. Now I come to think of it, I thought that we didn't have much time to love at that time. I really loved him and he was my first lover. I agreed to above quotation, we can't fall asleep when we are in love.

강사 첨삭

Hi Julie, Thank you so much for sending this I am really happy about what you have shared. I also agree with this quotation, it really feels good when somebody loves you. And we can\'t sleep because we are thinking about them. Well thank you again. See you in class. Take care always. ~Teacher Theresa \'You know you\'re in love when you can\'t fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.\' - Dr. [Name] met a man when I was 22 years old in University. >> I met a man when I was 22 years old in our University.He was very kind and loved me so much. >> Correct.At that time I liked to be with him all the time. >> Correct.At night he always walked me home and we talked over telephone until he returned home. >> Correct.Sometimes he and I talked over telephone till dawn. >> Sometimes he and I talked over the telephone till dawn.Now I come to think of it, I thought that we didn\'t have much time to love at that time. >>  DID YOU MEAN: Now I come to think of it, I thought that we didn\'t have much time to love each other at that time.I really loved him and he was my first lover. >> Correct.I agreed to above quotation, we can\'t fall asleep when we are in love. >> I agreed in the quotation above, we can\'t fall asleep when we are in love.

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