An essay
학생이 쓴 원문
'Life is either a daring adventure or nothing at all.'
~ Helen Keller
Helen Keller was blind, deaf and dumb.
I cannot imagine.. how can I live if I am blind, deaf, dumg?
She had overcome her handicap and been the great women in history.
She learned to speak from her good teacher.
I really admired that she can speak English, Latin language, French, German and Greek.
And she graduated from Harvard University at the head of one's class.
I thought that she felt life is hard challenge.
But she said life is a daring adventure.
She is truly great women.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julie,
Thank you for doing your homework.
Sometimes there are some limitations in us that are making us afraid to do our tasks.
But the good thing is that we shoudn\'t give up.
Let us be hopeful everyday.
See you in class.
Take care always!
~Teacher Theresa
\'Life is either a daring adventure or nothing at all.\' ~ Helen KellerHelen Keller was blind, deaf and dumb.
>> CorrectI cannot imagine.. how can I live if I am blind, deaf, dumg?
>> I cannot imagine how can I live if I am blind, deaf, dumb}: slow to learn or understand; lacking intellectual acuity
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She had overcome her handicap and been the great women in history.
>> CorrectShe learned to speak from her good teacher.
>> She learned to speak from her best teacher.I really admired that she can speak English, Latin language, French, German and Greek.
>> CorrectAnd she graduated from Harvard University at the head of one\'s class.
>> CorrectI thought that she felt life is hard challenge.
>> I thought that she felt life is the hardest challenge.But she said life is a daring adventure.
>> But she said that life is a daring adventure.She is truly great women.
>> Correct
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