An essay

2014-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

'All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost.' Frankly speaking I had learned English from my middle school. But I am still not fluent in English. I started to learn by PowerEnglish from last month. It is too hard to learn a foreign language. But I believe that I can speak English fluently in near future if I'll do my best to hear,write,memorize English words. I am wandering now but I am not lost. I will find the light in my life. Fighting !!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Julie!

Thank you for sending and doing your homework.

Yes! You are we should keep on fighting and hope that our future will be bright and beautiful.

I believe in that too.

Life is full of challenges but let us be brave to face it!

Well see you next week!

Enjoy your weekend!

~Teacher Theresa

\'All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost.\'


Frankly speaking I had learned English from my middle school.

>> Correct!
But I am still not fluent in English.

>> Correct!
I started to learn by PowerEnglish from last month.

>> I started to learn English by Power English from last month.
It is too hard to learn a foreign language.

>> Correct!
But I believe that I can speak English fluently in near future if I\'ll do my best to hear,write,memorize English words.

>> But I believe that I can speak English fluently in the near future if I\'ll do my best to listen, write, memorize English words.
I am wandering now but I am not lost.

>> I am wondering now but I am not lost
I will find the light in my life.
>> DID YOU MEAN: But I know that I will find the light in my life.
Fighting !!!

>> Correct!

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