An essay
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강사 첨삭
Hi Julie!
Thank you for sending and doing your homework.
Yes! You are we should keep on fighting and hope that our future will be bright and beautiful.
I believe in that too.
Life is full of challenges but let us be brave to face it!
Well see you next week!
Enjoy your weekend!
~Teacher Theresa
\'All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost.\'
Frankly speaking I had learned English from my middle school.
>> Correct!
But I am still not fluent in English.
>> Correct!
I started to learn by PowerEnglish from last month.
>> I started to learn English by Power English from last month.
It is too hard to learn a foreign language.
>> Correct!
But I believe that I can speak English fluently in near future if I\'ll do my best to hear,write,memorize English words.
>> But I believe that I can speak English fluently in the near future if I\'ll do my best to listen, write, memorize English words.
I am wandering now but I am not lost.
>> I am wondering now but I am not lost
I will find the light in my life.
>> DID YOU MEAN: But I know that I will find the light in my life.
Fighting !!!
>> Correct!
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