An interview that points out what\'s wrong with us
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I don\'t quite remember which channel I was watching. So, I\'m afraid, I can\'t find the video of the interview on Youtube.
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I heard we had only single-figure, new confirmed cases again yesterday. >>I heard, we had a single-figured new confirmed case again yesterday.It seems to me that it is a sign that says we\'re doing a good job against coronavirus. >>correct
I watched an interview on the TV news which was about what a nurse who is giving herself up for patients thinks about the coronavirus crisis >>I watched an interview on the TV news which was about a nurse who is giving herself up for patients who think that coronavirus isn\'t a crisis.
She pointed out that she was worrying many people seemed to be having less care about how risky it was to go or stay at busy places without a mask. >>She pointed out that she is worried that many people seem to be having less care about how risky it is to go or stay at busy places without a mask.
In addition to her worrying, health professionals are confined to a small place, their hospital, fighting against the coronavirus while we can see a growing number of people being without a mask, which I found so sorry. >>In addition to her worries, health professionals are confined to a small place or in a hospital fighting against coronavirus while we see a growing number of people without masks, which I feel so sorry.
Those who are actually getting rid of the coronavirus are not the us who are exercising self-quarantine and social-distancing but the others who are out on a limb, putting up with the regular and endless twinges of sadness, jealousy and envy from the coronavirus. >>Those who are actually getting rid of the coronavirus are not us who are exercising self-quarantine and social-distancing but others who are out on a limb, putting up with the regular and endless twinges of sadness, jealousy, and envy from coronavirus.
For that reason, I believe that we should be taking great care of ourselves and make sure to put on a mask when we are somewhere with others. >>For that reason, I believe that we should be taking great care of ourselves and make sure to put on a mask whenever we go somewhere with other people.
And remember how tough a time all the health professionals are having now and then, of course, be thankful. >>And remember how tough for all the health professionals, they are having now and then, of course, be thankful.
After all, we all know that no one wants the Covid-19 crisis to go on, don\'t we? >>correct I don\'t quite remember which channel I was watching. So, I\'m afraid, I can\'t find the video of the interview on Youtube.
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