An introduction of my laboratory 1

It it about an introduction of my laboratory. It contains technical terms so it may be hard to understand for you. I hope you point out grammatic errors and abnormal expressions. It's a little long. Here it goes. --- High performance processors have continuously been demanded for about 50 years after the first computer emerged. To satisfy the demand, hardware functionalities had been added to processors, but this addition cause not only drastic increase of processor area, power consumption, NRE cost, but also the increase of design complexity. To overcome these drawbacks, several processors and DSPs which are specified to particular applications are integrated into single chip.

HI, [이름]!! Here are my corrections..I hope this helped. See you later.   It it about an introduction of my laboratory. >>This is an introduction of my laboratory. It contains technical terms so it may be hard to understand for you. >>It contains technical terms so it may be hard for you to understand. I hope you point out grammatic errors and abnormal expressions. >>CORRECT^^It's a little long.>>CORRECT^^ ***It's not a little long, [이름].... It's VERY long....hahahaha. Just kidding!Here it goes. >>CORRECT^^---High performance processors have continuously been demanded for about 50 years after the first computer emerged. >>CORRECT^^ To satisfy the demand, hardware functionalities had been added to processors, but this addition cause not only drastic increase of processor area, power consumption, NRE cost, but also the increase of design complexity. >>To satisfy the demand, hardware functionalities had been added to processors. Unfortunately, this addition caused not only drastic increase of processor area, power consumption, NRE cost, but also the increase of design complexity. ***Avoid run-on sentences or avoid putting too many thoughts in one sentence. If you can separate them into much simpler sentences, then do so. To overcome these drawbacks, several processors and DSPs which are specified to particular applications are integrated into single chip. >>To overcome these drawbacks, several processors and DSPs which are specified to particular applications are integrated into a single chip.