an ugg boots story.
학생이 쓴 원문
I told you I was drunk last saturday.
At that time I put on the boots and I had a good time
with my friends. and then as soon as one of them looked at my boots
he yelled at me.
"you are a hunter!!"
We were burst into laughter all becuse my boots which was made of
sheep skin and sheep hair looked like hunter's one.
So I said " yeah~hey piggy~! I came because I'll hold you for food."
I was feeling a little high already. huhuhu.
Anyway as a result I had a terrible hangover.
I'll need to refrain from too much alcohol for my health.
Your voice in this morning was better than before.
It was great. Take care lei~~
http://www.ugg.co.kr/ver2010_html/sub_html/2010_collection/ver2010_sub_collection_fw_1892sand.html
there is my boots
강사 첨삭
Hi J! Wow I really like your boots. It's not hard to walk with during winter. And it is expensive too!!! You should thank your boyfriend for it. It is good that he had his early Christmas gift to you already. Now I [이름]der what will my boyfriend give me this Christmas. Have a great Monday J!!!
Lei J
I told you I was drunk last saturday.
>>correct
At that time I put on the boots and I had a good time with my friends.
>>correct
and then as soon as one of them looked at my boots he yelled at me.
>>correct
"you are a hunter!!"
>>correct
We were burst into laughter all becuse my boots which was made of sheep skin and sheep hair looked like hunter's one.
>>We burst into laughters all because of my boots which was made from sheep skin and hair that it looked like a hunter's boots.
So I said " yeah~hey piggy~!
>>correct
I came because I'll hold you for food."
>>correct
I was feeling a little high already. huhuhu.
>>correct
Anyway as a result I had a terrible hangover.
>>correct
I'll need to refrain from too much alcohol for my health.
>>correct
Your voice in this morning was better than before.
>>Your voice this morning was better than before.
It was great. Take care lei~~
>>correct
http://www.ugg.co.kr/ver2010_html/sub_html/2010_collection/ver2010_sub_collection_fw_1892sand.html
there is my boots
>>you can check my boots from this link.
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