And then....
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And then....
>>And then...
upon comming back home, I was called by my coworker.
>>While I was coming back home, I was called by my coworker.
He lives beside My home.
>>Correct
We are same stair.
>>We are on the same floor.
There were many peoples and some food, alchol.
>>There were many people with some food, and alcohol.
In fact he is not long here.
>>In fact ,he has not stayed long here.
he moved just three month ago.
>>He just moved three months ago.
he had flown different type of aircraft.
>>He had flown different types of aircraft.
he was instructor in intermediate course of flying school.
>>He was an instructor for intermediate course of an aviation school.
but now he apply to our aircraft.
>>But now, he applied in our aircraft.
Today is first day.
>>Today was his first day.
He invite main people in our office.
>> He invited important people from our office.
however that time was really bad to me.
>>However, at that time, it was really bad for me.
When I was invited, I was preparing our class.
>>When I was invited, I was preparing for our class.
Turn on the computer. and insert the wep cam
>>I turned on the computer and connected the web cam.
after all I was absent from our class. ㅠㅠ
>> But after doing all of these, still, I was absent.
but tomorrow I will.
>> However, I won't be absent tomorrow.
Sorry. take care teacher louise.
>>Sorry and take care teacher Louise.
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