and then, we headed to next building.

2013-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Leah

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I like English and I like French very much. My brother likes Maths but he doesn't like History. The children forgot their homework, so the teacher was angry with them. Can you read and write English words? Are the questions right or wrong? It's great and it's fun. Would you like tea or hot chocolate for your breakfast? Our car is old, but it drives beautifully. It was very warm, so we all went swimming. Do we have French or Music after the break? and then, we headed to next building located in Right to the statue. The building called Victoria emmanuelle 2 galleria had many luxury shopping malls. Among these famous brand shops, I found the PRADA shop which was main shop. I didn't have courage to enter that shop, so we were just satisfied with window shoping. the inside of building had a great pictures which was drown on the wall. the floor was covered by glass, which made possible to bright inside street. Even the Mc donald in the street had a gold colored sign board.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear!

Hope you are doing well today.

Thank you for doing your homework, I do appreciate the time and effort.Through your homework, I can see a lot of improvements in you.Not only in the way you answer but also in the manner you create your essays.

As for your essay, I think, if I will be in your situation, I would also do window-shopping because I will be contemplating of the price. At least you had a great time and who knows, you might be given another chance to visit the place and by that time, you can already shop whatever you want.Anyway,thank you for sharing your experience.I had fun reading it.

Can\'t wait to see you on our next class.

^^T.Nina^^

I like English and I like French very much.

>> Correct... or you may also say I like English and French very much.
My brother likes Maths but he doesn\'t like History.

>> Correct...you just need to take out the letter [s] from Maths...

>> My brother likes Math but he doesn\'t like History.
The children forgot their homework, so the teacher was angry with them.

>> Correct

>> you may also say....The children forgot their homework, so the teacher got mad at them.
Can you read and write English words?

>> Correct
Are the questions right or wrong?

>> Correct
It\'s great and it\'s fun.

>> Correct
Would you like tea or hot chocolate for your breakfast?

>> Correct
Our car is old, but it drives beautifully.

>> Correct
It was very warm, so we all went swimming.

>> Correct
Do we have French or Music after the break?

>> Correct
and then, we headed to next building located in Right to the statue.

>> Then we headed to the next building located at the right side of the statue.

The building called Victoria emmanuelle 2 galleria had many luxury shopping malls.

>> The building called Victoria Emmanulle 2 galleria had many luxurious shopping malls.

Among these famous brand shops, I found the PRADA shop which was main shop

>> Among those famous brand shops, I found the PRADA shop which was the main shop.
I didn\'t have courage to enter that shop, so we were just satisfied with window shoping. the inside of building had a great pictures which was drown on the wall.

>> I didn\'t have the courage to enter that shop, so we were just satisfied window shopping. The inside of the building had great pictures drawn on the wall.

>> or you may also say....The inside walls of the building were painted with great pictures.
the floor was covered by glass, which made possible to bright inside street.

>> The floor was covered with glass which made it possible to brighten up the street.
Even the Mc donald in the street had a gold colored sign board.

>> Even McDonald\'s fastfood had a gold colored signboard.

>> On the street was McDonald who even had a gold colored signboard.^^

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