and there was a story.
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Hello there!
That is a very thoughtful opinion you stated. I also believe that everyone is entitled to his/her opinion and that one thing does not apply to everyone. I agree, too, with what you said about living in a society.
You did a great job stating a very clear opinion on the subject. There are just some minor grammar mistakes that I have spotted. Please go over the corrections.
Have a wonderful day!
T. Nina^^
As the owener of pet in the past, I agree with them who want to think their pet as family.
>>As a pet owner in the past, I agree with those who think of their pet as family.
Love makes all things possible.
>>CORRECT
So there are not incorrect decision or correct decision.
>>So there are no correct or incorrect opinions.
I just stand their position whatever their choice is.
>>I just stand by whatever their position is.
OR >>I just accept whatever their choice is.
But something exist in our society which have not to be occurred.
>>But there is something in our society which has not yet occurred.
If there are someone who is suffering from scream sound of pet or smell of pet.
>>If there is someone who is troubled by the noise and smell of a pet_
and then, pet owner must appology to him or her. and get a admission to them.
>>_then, the pet owner must apologize and must concede.
because We are living in society. we don\'t have any right to torture other people.
>>This is because we are living in a society. We don\'t have any right to pester other people.
Believe or not, there was a story.
>>CORRECT
In the center of galleria, the picture of bull is drown on ground.
>>In the center of a galleria, a picture of a bull is drawn on the ground.
If one who want to achive one\'s dream, the thing have to do is that one have to gramp bull\'s penis and turn around.
>>If one wants to achieve his or her dream, the person must grasp the bull\'s penis and turn around.
That\'s it. of course I did that.
>>That\'s it, and of course I did that.^^
After that, we went to out of the building. we found a statue modeled Reonardo Da Vinci.
>>After that we went out of the building and we found a statue of Leonardo Da Vinci.^^
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