animal
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What good deeds have you done for the animals?
I have donted regulary to Greenpeace which is a environmetal pressure group and works to protect North pole bear.
and I have raised street cats everyday and provided houst in the winter.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
Wow! You have a big heart Ms. [Name]! God bless you more. :)
~Lucy
I have donted regulary to Greenpeace which is a environmetal pressure group and works to protect North pole bear.
>>I have donted regulary to Greenpeace which is an environmetal pressure group and works to protect North pole bears.
and I have raised street cats everyday and provided houst in the winter.
>>And I have raised street cats everyday and provided house in the winter.
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