Animal
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강사 첨삭
Hi Justin! ^.^
Thanks for dropping by and sending in your composition. Here are some of the corrections I've made.
A long time a go the on hunderd thousand animals liveed in Earth.
>>A long time ago, a hundred thousand animals lived on Earth.
but today we can see fifteen thousand animals lives in Earth.
>>But today, we can see fifteen thousand animals living on Earth.
an also today anendangered spedes type animal living about one hundred.
>>And also today, about one hundred endangered species that exist.
it a few animals.
>>There are only a few animals.
>> The number of animals are decreasing.
I think (I want to keep the engangered spedes animals and i wil safe th eanimals
>>I think, I want to keep the endangered species and protect these animals.
we can safe the animals!
>>We can save the animals!
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