Animal
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Why are animals important to humans?
- Since early times, humans have used animals in farming, trasporting. And humans can eat meat from animals.
2. What is the purpose of animals?
- I think that there is no purpose of living animals including the human being. But I have no idea why did all living thing born in.
Lucy! I always thank to you. I hope that you are happy forever. Have a good weekend and see you next monday!
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
Have a great weekend. :)
~Lucy
-Since early times, humans have used animals in farming, trasporting.
>>Since early times, humans have used animals in farming and trasporting.
And humans can eat meat from animals.
>>CORRECT!
> I think that there is no purpose of living animals including the human beings.
>>CORRECT!
But I have no idea why did all living thing born in.
>> But I have no idea why did all living things born.
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